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"HARD TIMES(WEEDMAN BEAT...i changed it a bit)"
62 Dope It's Dope
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Recorded 10 months ago

flow by: Dirty_Lips
beat by: Dirty_Lips

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KNUCKLEHEAD 		KNUCKLEHEAD wrote 4 months ago:
this is like something i would spit just like you said it is real not some whack shit. keep it up -Knucklez

no image 		jddapimp wrote 9 months ago:
hot shit yo check out oh no them 24s . http://www.dopetracks.com/track/73609 peep it

KillaGreen 		KillaGreen wrote 9 months ago:
http://www.dopetracks.com/track/72726 NEW FREE!

TLou 		TLou wrote 9 months ago:
smooth track

EUGOD 		EUGOD wrote 10 months ago:
#57

LOKA 		LOKA wrote 10 months ago:
this is a dope ass track!

jaware2000 		jaware2000 wrote 10 months ago:
ss55

spitfire21 		spitfire21 wrote 10 months ago:
thats heat homie #54

no image 		danatiboyz wrote 10 months ago:
53 yo nice work

bonefixxer 		bonefixxer wrote 10 months ago:
52 i feelin man, keep it strong.

twentyii 		twentyii wrote 10 months ago:
#51 real mellow oldskool style..

lordnamm 		lordnamm wrote 10 months ago:
#50

flowmatic 		flowmatic wrote 10 months ago:
#49

da_bullet 		da_bullet wrote 10 months ago:
good lyrics and good beat

IllUnique 		IllUnique wrote 10 months ago:
good shit homie

Jelika909 		Jelika909 wrote 10 months ago:
it's a cool but it sounds like u were readin the lyrics... i dont know if u are but thats what it sounds like. good job

2thumbsdown 		2thumbsdown wrote 10 months ago:
47

AirFos1 		AirFos1 wrote 10 months ago:
#46...Thats dope homie, dig that guitar

EpickOne 		EpickOne wrote 10 months ago:
I got you! Keep doin you! +1.. Come check out my DonDaDopeHead Disses! I just dropped my half of Round 2, its 7 minutes long! http://www.dopetracks.com/track/71445 checkout round 1 too. Stay up!

ROCCBOTTOM 		ROCCBOTTOM wrote 10 months ago:
it's ight but you need to tightihg up on your deliver it's all or nothing yo keep grinding

BobbyBarzyk 		BobbyBarzyk wrote 10 months ago:
nice

hazmat13 		hazmat13 wrote 10 months ago:
#44 homie its tight yo checkout this soon 2 b front pager http://www.dopetracks.com/track/71073

Thomazino 		Thomazino wrote 10 months ago:
Yeah that nice done homez... and ya right don`t need a hook less is more some times!! I do agree with mostaxx tho... but overall it`s DOPE!! # 43

MoStaxx 		MoStaxx wrote 10 months ago:
Its Stragit But You Gotaa Ride The Beat Better

only1bellee 		only1bellee wrote 10 months ago:
NICE SHIT LIL HOMIE...I FEEL YA #42

lollipops 		lollipops wrote 10 months ago:
keeping grinding, and stay cool. love LOLLIPOP'...........s#41

80GZ 		80GZ wrote 10 months ago:
Ur content n ur flow iz hot lil homie u jus need 2 cum harder like u sound lite u gota put ya heart, soul, n ya diaphram n 2 it ya dig, http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/28269 chek it?!

AlphaCharlieEcho 		AlphaCharlieEcho wrote 10 months ago:
im feelin it man... #40

HaeZ 		HaeZ wrote 10 months ago:
#39 Doped it for the message behind the song. Try adding a few words to each line to smooth out the lyrics.

spark007 		spark007 wrote 10 months ago:
#38

Razorwire04 		Razorwire04 wrote 10 months ago:
maan iiimm back baby this fire dog i like it man ima drop new beats 2morrow # 37 man

no image 		Siajlence wrote 10 months ago:
YO MAN I WOULDA DOPED THIS BUT THE SPAM MAIL DRIVIN ME CRAZY!! YOUR SUCKIN UP THE POST SPACE! EASE UP ON THE POSTS YOU PUSHIN OUT PPL REAL COMMENTS AND POSTS!

skittlez 		skittlez wrote 10 months ago:
it's got a good beat good lyrics but sounds like your reading it i know you are but it sounds like you tryin to read it it's gotta sound more like you know what to say next

dxfresh 		dxfresh wrote 10 months ago:
#35 RIGHT http://www.dopetracks.com/track/70658

FeelRage 		FeelRage wrote 10 months ago:
I like it. Not to complicated but still real.

no image 		rEzadu wrote 10 months ago:
nice..

YaBoyJG_ThaProdigy 		YaBoyJG_ThaProdigy wrote 10 months ago:
beats raw,rhymes are real,but make it sound more natural when u say it...u sound almost like a computer rappin or some shit but #32 on it

Mc_Scribe 		Mc_Scribe wrote 10 months ago:
Kick it more fluid, but u in da right direction homie #31

DaT_iLLy_BiTcH 		DaT_iLLy_BiTcH wrote 10 months ago:
dope point #31 i feel u on dis 1 check muh track out nd u'll kno wat i mean

Dondadopeman 		Dondadopeman wrote 10 months ago:
30............U SLEEPING..........http://www.dopetracks.com/track/70376 EPIK NONE DISS.....THE HOTTEST SHIT ON HERE TO THIS DAY!!!!!!

youngroc 		youngroc wrote 10 months ago:
#29..........DOPE SHIT

theKingJMAC 		theKingJMAC wrote 10 months ago:
http://www.dopetracks.com/track/68662 oops

theKingJMAC 		theKingJMAC wrote 10 months ago:
#28 overall it a great song!really didnt feel the flow(felt awkward) but felt the mssg,its missing something though? check out one a mine and leave me what ya think! http://www.dopetracks.com/track

AudioForensicks 		AudioForensicks wrote 10 months ago:
Not usually our style fam, but I hear ya. I think you should re-record it and smooth it out. You doing some real talk though, doped up! Peace. AF

BackwoodzEnt530 		BackwoodzEnt530 wrote 10 months ago:
etc... your rhymes would have been more fluid and not so slow and choppy... overall a good track.. i think this advice could really help anyone trying to rap..keep it up.. check my page!!

BackwoodzEnt530 		BackwoodzEnt530 wrote 10 months ago:
ya i like this joint- the beats is real clean... the vocals were decent too... i think if you had a better understanding of structure (lyrical wise, such as inside/outside rhymes, syllable placement,

KoolmanDaGreat 		KoolmanDaGreat wrote 10 months ago:
Very Nice.. Always Love

watkinz 		watkinz wrote 10 months ago:
#24 Dirty Lips This A Deep One Fam? Ya'll Make Me Wanna Cum Back Outta Retirement...Nice Shit Rite Here...WEEDMAN I c u on tha beat family!!!Salute!

ABStract 		ABStract wrote 10 months ago:
22.....real smooth feel

MzKrumpDancer 		MzKrumpDancer wrote 10 months ago:
dat waz tight...real hard hittin wordz

HEMANIFEZT 		HEMANIFEZT wrote 10 months ago:
that a real song

no image 		Joanicot wrote 10 months ago:
sick man

DakidStripez 		DakidStripez wrote 10 months ago:
yo my newest track called "Dont Hate Me" is the official DT stop hatin anthem check it out & comment http://www.dopetracks.com/track/70535

DakidStripez 		DakidStripez wrote 10 months ago:
yea nice shit #19

dominion 		dominion wrote 10 months ago:
So I peeped the message you sent and I have to say that I like your voice .. particularly in the intro and outro.

produce 		produce wrote 10 months ago:
U seemed a lil off track at times but your heart was felt in your rhym & beat....Keep banging partna! #18

Dirty_Lips 		Dirty_Lips wrote 10 months ago:
thanks 4 all the love and feedback.ill have more tracks 2 come soon.thanks 4 bein honest with me

leobdope 		leobdope wrote 10 months ago:
i thought it was aiight... 3 out of five... wasn't diggin it all that much im hype kinda guy personally... STAY UP!

Joystar 		Joystar wrote 10 months ago:
#16 real talk man S/S keep it pimpin

killaskan 		killaskan wrote 10 months ago:
15th homie you did it dirty hott track..s/s is doing their thang 100%..

cadillactwin2 		cadillactwin2 wrote 10 months ago:
u need antares auto tune to crisp up ya tune, some parts where out other than that i was feelin it

RECON 		RECON wrote 10 months ago:
numba 14 Shadow school militia here, fam this is ill i love the just honest sincerity your spittin and that true just passion, this reminds me of some old school baby bash, I LOVE IT! S/S 100% hip hop

KillaKain 		KillaKain wrote 10 months ago:
THIS IS REAL NICE. DOPE VIBE! S$ DOPENESS #12

WEEDMAN 		WEEDMAN wrote 10 months ago:
DAMNNNNNNNNNN YOU DID IT HOMIE (HOTFIRE/DOPENESS/REALNESS)

SoundsOvSilence 		SoundsOvSilence wrote 10 months ago:
$HADOW $CHOOL$' soldier was here, famz. rounding you up to 11. come check me out sometime when you get the chance.

BosSDaProblem 		BosSDaProblem wrote 10 months ago:
yea nice shytt....keep it up my dude

Seoul 		Seoul wrote 10 months ago:
#9 i c u lips. nice homey.

KillaGreen 		KillaGreen wrote 10 months ago:
yea nice Ballad nice flow clean produciton nice beat!

KDubz 		KDubz wrote 10 months ago:
He's back Pretty dope homie #7. Keep bangin that shit out Even the best in the game improve with practice Check the post skittlez wrote about tips on changing flow I gave him some tips that may helpU

kristi_krisis 		kristi_krisis wrote 10 months ago:
yeah dirty, this is real nice man... yeah i dig. beat and vocal work so well. big props 6

matteb 		matteb wrote 10 months ago:
5 keep at it my friend you keep getting better like double 0 and murph said just keep practicing

BushidoBeatz 		BushidoBeatz wrote 10 months ago:
props.

mikeskills 		mikeskills wrote 10 months ago:
thanks for the love..i think you should you should use diffrent tone threw out your music..just some tip..

double0negro 		double0negro wrote 10 months ago:
yeah I agree with murph keep working at it just seems rough around the edges but you can tell your putting your time in so props on that BEAT IZ FAT THOUGH

mikeskills 		mikeskills wrote 10 months ago:
http://www.dopetracks.com/track/70354

Lcproductionz 		Lcproductionz wrote 10 months ago:
coo track mellow. some real shit. i think u should change ur rap voice. when u spittin it sounds like u tryin to change ya voice. ur regular voice is better.just my opinion..nice track homie #3

mikeskills 		mikeskills wrote 10 months ago:
yep..its true..

ProphMurph 		ProphMurph wrote 10 months ago:
You kept it simple but that's totally fine because it sounds like you're feelin' what you're sayin'. No hook necessary, you're right on that. Keep writing! A little bit everyday is all it takes.

mikeskills 		mikeskills wrote 10 months ago:
same with my last one..check it out..dope and tru..keep it up..

Dirty_Lips 		Dirty_Lips wrote 10 months ago:
this took a bit of time...please comment on it and tell me wat u liked and wat u didnt.thanks

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